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Lemma! Oh my gosh! I ADORE this porm. Yes yes yess I do. It was very simple, but this line absolutely did it for me. "Don't worry honey; I'm not gonna cry." <--- Best line I've read all day. As I feel I can take it no more.
^^I think you should put it as: "As I feel I can't take it anymore" Oh, and I think you meants "can't" instead of "can"
***poem o.o I almost wrote porn.
LOL you make me laugh XD
I think I had it as "As I feel I can take it no more" in the first place and then changed it. I'll go change it back right away =)
I luv this poem its so sad it reminds me of my dad leaving me and my mom
Hey this is a greqat poem sad :(
this poem is so strong
i can relate to it
i added it to my fav's
Pretending is all anyone can seem to do lately.
This was great. Flow and rhythem were not over done.
Wow i love this poem... its so sad... i've said the exact same things before... and i've done the exact opposite... great job.5/5
Wow. This was amazing, simply amazing. The emotions were just radiating off of the words, and the flow was flawless. I really love the repetition of "I tell you', it added a little something extra to the poem. Beautiful job. :) Overall: 5.5
I can feel the pain in this, the message was a simple, on point and never strayed. 5/5
This is really cool I like the controdicting part of this whole poem it throws sort of an edge on the whole thing. This is awesome
Oooh loved this one...I think you should seperate it into stanzas to make it alittle nicer to read. You should tweek the form a little but over all good job
Haha, really like this poem... Good job, I'm gonna look forward for another one :)
by Alexa Eudis
Wow, i love it. the contradicitng lines, really creative, brilliant!
by Andy loves Jesus
Niice work. a 5/5 I must say. Very well done.
Sad but beautiful...good mix
Good job! i really liked the parallels/repeticion
by Pink Romance
This poem was amazing.....
I had a few moments here in there. great job keep it up. =]
SnAp Yo FiNgAs
I think it coulda been a little longer and the last line should have been a little stronger. but thats just my opinion.
I tell you that I'm not gonna cry
As tears run down my cheeks.
^ thats a great start. liked it. 5/5 for the starting.
you maybe should have made 2 stanzas not just one.
though overall its a very good poem. i like it :]
the idea behind it is very strong, and the irony and the imagery it shows is good.
keep up the really good work. xx amy