Comments : Defining me

  • 10 years ago

    by Narphangu

    I just wrote a comment, then I voted, and my comment was lost.

    Basically, I said I liked it, and this line[s] was my favorite:
    "cynical or realistic, the line is often blurred
    unmoving resolution to either side is just absurd"
    Because I laughed, and I like it, and I'm going to steal it and dance around with it, if you don't mind.

    Don't kill yourself. You sorta sound suicidal. Don't do it. Cause I'd be sad. And, I'd run out of poems to steal and dance with. Even if I am weird. It's fun. You should try it sometimes. I'm ramblinggg.

    I think I should be banned from commenting. I'm bad at it.
    But, I like your poem!
    I gave it a five. Blah!

  • 10 years ago

    by AGirlWorthFightingFor

    No, I am not suicidal -- far from it. XD I don't normally comment on my poems, but I would like to avoid getting anymore spam. not from you, this was someone else, well-meaning as it may be, it was entirely unneccessary.