Comments : S*H*E*L*B*Y*

  • 10 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Just so sweet...just a hell of a poem! I love it!!! I feel like i was being told these things but i know i wasnt but very well written with the touch of sweet syrup passion :)




  • 10 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Ah baby girl. I hate that. Ha. That cutesty wootsty nick name bothers me for some reason. :) Anyways! On to the poem! :D

    I liked it. ^_^ I can relate to it (who couldn't?!?!). It was short yet sweet. If this is a rhyming poem it's not consistent. Once again remember the picture frame conversation we talked about. Capitalize those I's. :) Overall I'm going to give you a four. Something about this poem makes me very happy and just reminds me of what love feels like and how wonderful it is. That's the whole point of being a poet. To be able to reach deep into people's hearts. You did that very well. Four indeed. :) <3

  • 10 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    A very good poem!
    i bet every girl wishes that someguy wpould feel that way and SAY it....:)
    Great Job once again

  • 10 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Wow this poem is wow.=)