Will I pull the trigger?

Was the gun aimed true?
Seems to me that it should be pointed at your own expectations.
When you accept the 'you' that comes from another, you might as well pull the trigger:
Shut it down, it belongs to another.
Keep at it; by the morning, if you live, & if your aim is true, you'll have killed the falsehoods and come into the one who is truly yourself.

I like this one alot.

Your poem was expressive with feelings if your profile is right these feeling should be on hold or saved for the future. I belong to a time when at your age girls were still immature and innocence was real. Now all the magic is gone and confusion reigns as TV and film have taken away the veil and answers are readily available, so I reas about lost innocence. Kids of your age know so much more than my generation. Your poem was brilliant but I think it should of been written when you are older a young girl should not let a boy or man leave his mark as you have so much more ahead of you to enjoy and savour. Hope your poem was simply a relief valve as a lot of mine are I gave you a 5/5.
Ray S (sad old man)

That last line was really effective. If you had structured you're writing into stanzas, it would be more organised and easier to read, but i think it was a great poem. such tender feelings. good job!

I love it! I can relate to it; nevertheless hope you're doing ok.
keep it up.
5/5