Comments : Sun-rays (a new start)

  • 9 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Omg...I'm so wow'd By this poem..Honestly! It's Wonderful! The Ryhming..The Vivid Images I was given..All of it was so clear in my head. I'm very glad you posted this. It was wonderful. I believe You Have A Talent.
    Keep It Up
    5/5

    -Ally

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wowwww. This is amazing! You did such an excellent job with the flow and rhyming. wow, i'm speechless.. again. amazing, amazing, amazing!! 5/5

    RubberDuckiex3

  • 9 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Wow, this piece was so wonderful.keep up the good work.5/5

    *harlea

  • 9 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Your words are magic in each poem I read, I must say you are very talented .
    This one was beautifully done, such an easy read.
    Another Darcy masterpiece

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah Dawn

    Awesome Poem! One of the best i've read in a long time! Definantly going to be added to my favs list! Great Job... Keep it up!

  • 9 years ago

    by Mia

    Damn. WOw. you are too good. your poems make me enjoy life a tiny bit more.

  • 9 years ago

    by Silent Angel

    Fantastic Poem. I know its your first on the site, i think its your first, haha, but it is fantastic. Great Job!
    Silent Angel

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Your words flow so well, as if there was no effort on your part to write them, that you just thought them and they could not wait to get to the page. I know this does not make sense but I don't know anyother way to say what I mean, effortless would sum it up. If this is any indication of how you write, I am in for a treat when I read your other poetry. Thank you for such beautiful words.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What an uplifting piece and a RYHME!!! A new I would find one from you, Michael.
    Either way, whatever you write, it is natural and beautifully done. Wonderful
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow so beautiful written. The wording and everything so well tuned. I enjoyed reading.
    Add to my favorite.