Omg...I'm so wow'd By this poem..Honestly! It's Wonderful! The Ryhming..The Vivid Images I was given..All of it was so clear in my head. I'm very glad you posted this. It was wonderful. I believe You Have A Talent.
Keep It Up
Your words flow so well, as if there was no effort on your part to write them, that you just thought them and they could not wait to get to the page. I know this does not make sense but I don't know anyother way to say what I mean, effortless would sum it up. If this is any indication of how you write, I am in for a treat when I read your other poetry. Thank you for such beautiful words.
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
What an uplifting piece and a RYHME!!! A new I would find one from you, Michael.
Either way, whatever you write, it is natural and beautifully done. Wonderful
All the best,