Hey man I feel the same way casue I last my faith when I was younger than you... and I lost my grandfather who was like my best friend... and all the people I have met the just gave me the faith to believe in anything.

I liked it. Yes, there was some good imagery. I pictured you sitting under the stars on he grass, looking up and thinking about life. Just life and the things you've gone through. Really the poem is more like a scrapbook. We are fed multiple images with spaces in between. The first picture is of thinking on the grass, the second is suffering (I pictured war), the third I just pictured how I used to be when I was loosing myself. I then saw god and angels and a snapshot of you laughing with your grandmother, then I just thought of how I'm better now again. I hope this answered your question. :/ You asked if I pictured anything and that is what I saw.

Now for the poem part. Just to warn you I'm sort of the Simon Cowell of poetry.

Overall I thought it was a lovely poem. I could relate to the poem and I could picture parts of my life and parts described in the poem, all in one. I personally feel capitalization and consistency are the picture frame of poetry. It may not be the picture itself but it helps bring out the beauty of the poem and if the wrong frame is picked out, it could distract the viewer from the true artwork. So my advice is, always capitalize I, I've, and I'm, if you're using commas make sure to see if you have any periods in your poem and make sure you're commas are actually doing something for the poem. If they're not used correctly they don't really add to the poem, and to keep up the good work. :) I'd give this a four for the poem itself and a three for the framework. I can't really do that so I'll give you a four because, like I said, it was overall, a good poem.

Crap i dont know if i can compete with everyone elses on here lol oh well let me give it a shot :P

Dannng!!! This poem was just so amazing!!!! It had so much meaning TRAVIS!!! I mean all the words put into this poem was the right choice, you put them together like if this poem was a puzzle and you had to put the pieces together! But it made me think all so much!!! It was just a piece of work!!!! Amazing job my love!!!! I just love it!!! I would so give higher than a 5/5 but cant just love it though!!!!<333

CourtneyxHolland~~

This was a nice poem I enjoyed it thanks for your comment on my poem "Haunting whispers"

Very true! :)

Hey.. I love your writting.. your very good.. nd imagintive.. I've lost faith a couple times too.. but the people around me helped me find it nd belive again.. Faith is an extrodoniary gift!!!.. Keep up the writting!!!..

Mate, that is touching

This is rly touching i teard up lol kep up ur wonderful work

I like it! I'm going to be a bit mean and say that I love the feeling and emotion but it needs to flow more. It doesn't have to rhyme but it needs rhythm like a song. Other than that I love it! keep it up!

I love this poem it is nice to no that there is a guy who writes poems and is still really sweet.
Love,
Amanda

Wow....im speechless once again you have me lost of my words on this poem words cant describe how good this is i loved it
Amazing job Travis!!!
5/5

Its really kewl

Wow..i like it. It's true too. People fall in and out of faith..i kno i sometimes do, then again who doesn't. But i liked it. Sorry to hear about your grandma. I kno what its like to lose a family member that you're close with....