I need to know...so tell me

by StandStill   Mar 28, 2008


If i closed my ears
how loud would you scream?
please, i need to know
to you...how much do i mean?

if i cried a thousand tears
and wept a thousand nights
how long before you realized
you could make it right?

if i gave up on myself
and lost it all
how long before you saved me
would you drop me, let me fall?

if i loved you with my whole heart
and my heart got broke
how long before you realized
on my tears....i choke?

so tell me now
i need to know
how much do i mean
how far for me would you go?

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  • 9 years ago

    by claire

    ITS AMAZING

  • 9 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    Good poem! Alot of emotion...

  • 9 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow, nice poem! Lot of emotion from it.. as "Mist" said.. hope they tell you

  • 9 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Kinda sad (obviously) but touching

  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This piece was okay. Nothing special in my mind, I'm afraid. Sorry. I liked the first stanza and the idea of the piece, but from the second stanza on, the piece just seemed...lifeless.

    Brad

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