Comments : Inner Beauty

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Amen to that sweet Sarah!

    A beautiful and proud statement and you are absolutely right!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    This poem holds so much truth. Always look for the inner beauty of others.

    Believe in your self
    And walk with pride
    Don't be ashamed
    Because you're beautiful face should never hide!

    Great job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Edit:
    First stanza, third line, you mean they are. :)
    Third stanza first line, yourself is one word.

    Good comments:
    It was a very positive poem. Short yet sweet. You rhymed consistently and the title wasn't bad.

    Improve on comments:
    Punctuation is inconsistent. Some areas you have end punctuation while other sentences lack end punctuation. Try to use different words. I prefer rhyming schemes with more complicated words. However, that is just me, the great thing about poetry is in the end it doesn't matter as long as you're happy. :)

    Rating:
    4. It wasn't a bad poem. It was, overall, written correctly and was consistent in rhyming. I wish there was a little more zest to it but other than that, it wasn't bad.

  • 11 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Wow this is wow... Great great job this is your best in my opinion... Flowed perfectly.. Everything about it was great excellent job 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen

    Good Job..Beautifully written and very inspiring..I loved everythin about it..Brilliant piece..5/5