Comments : Simply Wrong

  • 9 years ago

    by Sourav

    Honestly, this is very good. I love the style. I really liked this poem a lot. Well done Natalie!

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awesome work xx

  • 9 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    I dont know...I may like it I may not. I mean i can understand it, but it doesnt really have a poetic quality to me. I mean like it doesnt exactly have any poetic techniques. Hmm. It leaves me not knowing what to say. I just dont know...

    (maybe thats what you wanted?)

  • 9 years ago

    by unknown

    Great poem.. The emotion in this poem was strong... Also meaningful.. As meaningful as the other one i've read just now... You're a good writer..
    Well done..
    Keep up the good work..

  • 9 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    Dang, this is so sad!
    He probably lost someone good.
    It's a very good poem.
    Good job!
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Syn

    Also, Very good.

    I really enjoy the flow of this poem, it is very clear where pauses should be.

    5/5

    -Syn

  • 9 years ago

    by OooOaMbeR JustInEOooO

    Wow. i loved the way this poem flowed, it makes the emotions seemed more mixed. gives the poem more of a confused feeling.. great great job!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Freedom

    Yes yes yes very nice poem,and unfortunately i can relate it to myself :( but i loved this poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    Very vivid, and thugh it has a more depressing subject youmade it seem a but more lighthearted, at least to me anyway.
    5/5 :) Keep up the amazing work!

  • 9 years ago

    by xoOrdinaryGirlox

    #2

    You are an amazing writer :) It's to straight to the point, and I just can't faulter it! It's quite sad though, but the way you have written it, it portrays anger as well. But yet, it's beautiful :)