Comments : Liquid

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    5/5 xx

  • 9 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    See this one is better. Therse a metaphoric undertone that leaves the reader wondering with an aftertaste of what was just read. I love the short simplicity but with energy filled lines.

  • 9 years ago

    by unknown

    I must admit that there are not so many words to be read. lol
    But it's great.. It's meaningful,... and good choice of words too...
    Well done..
    Good luck with your contest..

  • 9 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    An amazing poem.
    Beautifully written.
    Hope you do good in the contest.
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Syn

    Very good:-)

    great write, good read:-)

    5/5, you have my vote.

  • 9 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    I really like this. You portrayed your emotions excellently and managed to say so much within such short piece which is impressive. I can relate to this write in a way. I like the atmosphere that you created and the fact that every word seem perfectly picked.
    Greatly done!

  • 9 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Amazing!
    i like how you started and ended with a version of the same line. great free verse. i liked it a lot! : )

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by xoOrdinaryGirlox

    May I congradulate you for taking joint third :) I simply could not pick one. It was so hard.

    #1

    I love short poems, and I am truly mesmerized at how you put so much emotion and feeling into such a short and simple piece! I absolutely loved it :) Thankyou for entering it, it made the contest worth while :)