I really like this. You portrayed your emotions excellently and managed to say so much within such short piece which is impressive. I can relate to this write in a way. I like the atmosphere that you created and the fact that every word seem perfectly picked.
May I congradulate you for taking joint third :) I simply could not pick one. It was so hard.
I love short poems, and I am truly mesmerized at how you put so much emotion and feeling into such a short and simple piece! I absolutely loved it :) Thankyou for entering it, it made the contest worth while :)