Sun rises Tomorrow

by David   Apr 7, 2008


If the sun rises tomorrow,
I'd tell you over and over again
That you're my girl and I'll try
With my whole heart,
Every breath I take, every pounding beat
I love you so much

I hope the sun rises tomorrow
So I can see you once more
Laying beside me, asleep in my arms

What if no sun rises tomorrow?
The missed opportunity to be kissed by you
To be held closely by you,
Already my heart aches for you,
Longs to be with you, the pain becoming stronger each minute
I love you so much

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  • 15 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Another good poem.. but i didnt feel like the ending was as strong as it could have been but it was an okay ending. i was just expecting more.. but other than that you did a great job with expressing your emotions for this girl. nice job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by CrazyCowLady

    I love this so much
    But makes me sad because i know you will never feel this way about me
    My favourite lines are:
    I hope the sun rises tomorrow
    So I can see you once more
    Laying beside me, asleep in my arms
    It really touches my heart

    Hannah 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I really felt to the point that I almost cried, honestly. It was a touching and deep. piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A very romantic piece for your girly, which came from the heart.. beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    David
    A very loving and sweet poem. Your love can be felt in this piece.
    Good job!
    Take Care Cindy

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