Super awesome!
super good,
how else can i explain it?
just....
amazazazing!

Remind me to never piss you off. Lol, kidding.
You did a good job with this, deep stuff. one thing;
"I felt played like a puppet,
And she just cut my string"

^^ Try;
I felt played like a puppet,
and she cut off my strings.

It sounds better.
Other than that amazing job, keep it up dear.

Absolutely brilliant imagery! the wording was completely astounding, the rhyme perfect and the flow fantastic! 5/5 a great use of words. i love this piece, there was a vivid picture within my mind

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~