Very touching poem, I feel sad for you. ;_;

Great story, your imagery made me feel like i was there watching this progress through your eyes. The end brought a few tears to my eyes, it hits close to home. The only thing is maybe work with the flow and it would be flawless. Great job 5/5

People die, not their memories.... Someone comes up with a cure for it so that no more friends or people are lost...... So wonderful poem. Keep on writing

Bes Wishez....From 007

My granmother went through cancer 3 times, the chemo is disgusting. so v

'Chemo killed you.
Killed your appearance,
withdrew you from the living
turned you into the outcast.
But no matter what,
i still love you.
To bad it didn't kill the filthy disease.'

- this was the part of the poem that made me feel very connected with it, its ture though you wish that the blooming chemo would destroy the diease instead of the person that what its upposed to do :[

it has a very sad ending :[ kinda upset me and thats not normal.

loved it :[
xxxx