Comments : Happy Birthday Darling

  • 9 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    The heartache that one can feel is purely wrenching.

    When a couple has grown seperated while being together the only thing one can ask is how? But..you have answered that question for the readers who have never walked in those sadden footsteps.

    Honestly, I don't know whether to cry or to give you a hug and let you cry... hey we will both cry if that is what the heart desires.

    Another fantastically penned poem my dear.

    ~~Sher

  • 9 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is written simply and streight. I liked the rhymes, although the first stanza didn't have any in the first two lines. The choosing of words is nice although the rhymes seemed forced. Try doing better next time 4/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked the tone of this piece especially, and how the title suggests a different poem than one would expect. Obviously I also liked the basics - words, rhymes, etc, etc.

    Brad

  • 9 years ago

    by luxen

    Woooooow! this is touchy wat a great work man!!keep on doing the best...