This poems tell a story. It was easy to read it..I like the rhytm of it.. I specially like this part:

"No Touch, No Lust, The purest love ever
You never knew before love was yet so beautiful
You felt so lucky dreaming of your future
Forever you promised to live faithful."
This is very beautifully said. I really just felt... *awwwwwwwwwww* Maybe because you (as speaker of the story) are telling this to a girl...So I can kind of felt throw the poem you were talking to me. You did brilliant..

The end of poem is sad.. :( But...every love story doen't have a happy ending...readers can not remand it...

Good job!

An excellent write...

"The journey still goes on in two different parts
Once you cried a lot & he consoled you
Now he too needs you to console him crying your tears
But Today... he cannot find you."

^^the last lines really moved me... so much pain hidden inside those words... very emotional...

A sad and beautifully written poem.I felt the pain behind it too ,I was moved and had tears in my eyes.

WOW!! is there ctually a guy like that???
I really liked the feelings in this poem
its so deep

keep it up 007 :)

Wow, another passionae and deep poem

well done karan i really liked your poems

can i know your whole stroy about this girl?

The poem was so deep...
to me it was real...
Hope to hear so more poems from you...
Keep it up...

That was true soul right there. That was very moving and easy to understand. I enjoyed this poem very much.

keep it up.

This poem was amazing,
though the end was sad, it was also happy because the pain of hers was forgotten and she at least had a good true love. 5/5

I love this poem. Great Emotion.

Wow, this is truely besutiful
I can completly relate to this poem
And its sooo touching
Congrats it`s good :)

That was deep and nice i love it

That was deep and nice i love it

Oh my goodness, this is really good. I can really relate; I love the part where you said
"Till one day he came into your life,
you got a shoulder to cry on
you shared your life out like never before
it was on him you felt you'll ever rely on"
I thought that was really pretty; great job 5/5 =)

WOW! Very, very deep, Karan. Another brilliant piece by you. Very inspiring. Very amazing. Very true, obviously... and just bloody radical! 5/5