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Well i though it was good. i loved it:)

Lol wow umm that like explains so much. Im really glad a guy is finally talking about his feelings lol. Most guys dont do that and they try to act "tough" lol anyways good job. :)

No comment as girl above..

But interesting question... bond has to think..... I mean discuss it with Q, M, n money penney she will thrash me...

Too good Adel... Keep goin..

Best wishez...

This is really nice. And i agree wth u bro sometimes we gals act like a jerk. Well u cant clap wth one hand. But it was nice reading.

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God bless u

My sweet bro,

You are growing as a writer!
This poem has such a good flow and I love the statement you have made!
Bravo sweetheart!

Love,

Ingrid 5/5

Well, I personally think relationships NEVER end because of one person. Both persons have mistakes. And I am sure if one behaves like an angel there is no such a person who would would want to hurt the most beautiful angel in this world, or if there is, the person is very sick-minded..

Glad you wrote this poem.. it is your view about this issue. Nice work. :)

I ttly agree....girls always say that a guy broke her heart....but did he?...are they just sayin it to say it.....but when a guy really loves a girl and that girl is the jerk in the relationship...then thats when it is necesary for the guy to feel he should say or to feel that she did that...

but anyways great job
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I really liked the message of this poem. A lot of times girls get to caught up in telling themselves that he did something wrong or it is his fault for the way that they acted, but thats not true at all, we as women are in total control of our emotions and should act like it from time to time. And while I am not defending all men for there are some dogs out there, there are some women that are just as bad, and I think that your poem expressed that beautifuly. So next time I hear a girl complaning on the street I am going to wonder, what was her role in this whole situation? Nice job, thanks for making me think so late at night.

Im glad you expressed your thoughts and feelings....this is indeed a "straight form the heart" writing.

you did well on this.

s~

Very well written, also very true. Not a lot of guys will actually take time to show females the truth.

Guys are jerks,but what about me?...i aint :D

I like it alot..guys do get there hearts broke yet we take it for granted.....bravo!!!

Oh wow. i guess heart breakers come from all genders. i'm starting 2 see that maybe girls r wors wen it comes 2 breaking hearts. wonderful poem, keep it up. 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

Wow. never seen it like that tho.Good Work<3

It iz so true! most the guyz r jerkz but they dont really "break our hearts" inless they can stick their hand inside our chest (ew) and literally break it without squishing it too death lol yes us galz r jerkz too at timez. great poem peep! keep up great worx!
-d

Omg this is really good ilike it alot

Amazing! it really is! the message is really clrear

Nice poem, def. different and new. Loved the idea and the last part was great very strong and true sometimes.
Great job.

Really good!!

"Then tell me why my hair is grey?" LOL haha

good work

zeinab