Comments : My Opposed Gender

  • 9 years ago

    by sweet escape

    In the second line of your poem the 'they' sould be THE.

    but other than that it is good and i love it.
    5

  • 9 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww!!..this is soo cute!..and really true!!!...great job!
    Aly

  • 9 years ago

    by munkee04

    Your poem is very true... i agree with everythhing you said about boys...like they say...you cant live with them, but you cant live without them...You write very nicely...keep it up!

  • 9 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like funny poems and this one especially wasn't funny for me. I simply don't like this, I don't like this type of poetry at all.

  • 9 years ago

    by jLegendc

    This is so true!
    we tend to be tough but there will always be something or someone that can tame a wild beast!
    nice topic and well written.. =D

  • 9 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very interesting, however i didnt find it that funny, more like an amusing love tail, somewhere in the middle of a love and funny poem. Oh and I think you made a mistake here:

    'They stupid things that they think are amusing'

    I think it should be: they "do" stupid things that they think are amusing. But it was a good try 4/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very sweet poem... i liked it...
    ya dats what girls feel... you have captured it beautifully...

  • 9 years ago

    by MR F R 3 S H

    Boys are not lyke that were just naturally kool!!.....lol nice poem 5/5 ",