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by sweet escape
In the second line of your poem the 'they' sould be THE.
but other than that it is good and i love it.
Aww!!..this is soo cute!..and really true!!!...great job!
Your poem is very true... i agree with everythhing you said about boys...like they say...you cant live with them, but you cant live without them...You write very nicely...keep it up!
I don't like funny poems and this one especially wasn't funny for me. I simply don't like this, I don't like this type of poetry at all.
This is so true!
we tend to be tough but there will always be something or someone that can tame a wild beast!
nice topic and well written.. =D
Very interesting, however i didnt find it that funny, more like an amusing love tail, somewhere in the middle of a love and funny poem. Oh and I think you made a mistake here:
'They stupid things that they think are amusing'
I think it should be: they "do" stupid things that they think are amusing. But it was a good try 4/5
by Lonely Rider
Very sweet poem... i liked it...
ya dats what girls feel... you have captured it beautifully...
by MR F R 3 S H
Boys are not lyke that were just naturally kool!!.....lol nice poem 5/5 ",