Comments : Wake me up

  • 9 years ago

    by Sammerz

    Awww....this poem is truly amazing like you...words you choose made it perfect like you.
    5/5
    Fabolous Job Hun!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    This is an amazing piece bro.5/5
    **harlea

  • For whatever reason this came on in my brain as an 80's song. :) It was good. ^_^ Poems are usually always better when they're made into songs. :D I'll give it a four.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dayna

    WOW!! this is a great poem Travis seriously!!!! keep it up man!!! i love reading ur poems!!!
    peace
    "N"
    love
    ~D@yn~

  • 9 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Awe.. Travis!!.. Its very good!!.. I love it!!.. great poem.. keep it up!!.. ^-^

  • 9 years ago

    by Andrew

    What can i say, really nice poem.. I really like the way you expressed your feelings in this poem, very fabulous, it made my heart skip a beat.. To express feelings like this is hard but you did it travis. I believe your BESTIE understands, and will never judge you, believe me you bestie will never leave. This poem earned a spot in my most favourite. Keep it up.

  • 9 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    Great great job!
    i felt the pleading-ness of you not wantign to lose your bestie.
    the emotions were amazing and intense for me.

    Great Great job!

    <3
    XxAshleyxX

  • Wow!
    i love that poem
    u express youself so well !!!

  • 9 years ago

    by alinaXonly1

    Amazing poem, really has true meanings, im sure that your crush wont leave after they read this. it has alot of meanings to it. i agree that poems have to deal with life 90% of the time.
    from alina

  • 9 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    I hope he reads this poem

    you seem sweet, so he is truly lucky. :)