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Omg..this is so expressive and a beautifully written piece...i know exactly how you feel too! Awesome!
If I tell you that I love you
Then wouldn't this all end?
Because I'd rather keep it quiet
Than risk loosing my best friend
^^This line is so easy to understand and I really love your word choice also!^^
If I tell you that I need you
Will you stay or go?
I'm so afraid to say it
But I really need to know
^^Very pretty and and has a great flow to it^
If I tell you that you're different
Will you walk away?
How will you react?
What are you going to say?
^^This whole piece really shows your talent but i really like this line^^
If I tell you, you're my world
Will you be afraid?
Will it end up being
The worst choice I ever made?
^^ I love the stanza on this!!!!
I love what we have
But I just can't pretend
Because it really isn't easy
To be in love with your best friend
^^I LOVE THIS ENDING! Awesome job! For surely 5/5!!