Looking in the mirror is a face I hardly know,
it's dark and empty, without any glow.
It never used to be like this,
but I guess there is always a first

^^^ This stanza was amazing. I don't know how else to describe it. This may have been a long poem but it really grabbed my attention from the beginning and I just couldn't stop reading! Deff one of your best work. Keep @ it =]
your friend,
~Forever Broken~

WooW, you are indeed a talented person

every poem i read i get amazed more.

you are in my favorite poets

IT'S REALLY AMAZING goo ahead

So much pain showind d present state of a person who tries n falls.... but still he/she hopes... one day things will change where he/she will not fall or there will be no more dissappointments...

Lovely poem... narrative as u always did thru d past one year...

Great job ash,

keep writing

best wishes,

Karan

Wow. you have talent. really good poem. and its just flows so perfect. great job in this onee 5/5

Amazing poem, it could be taken as a little comfusing at parts though..but all in all an amazing piece. =]

Great work,
-Kait.

This poem really made me think, is really deep and love it is full of wonders....

Wow.. this poem is A-MAZING. U deserve a 5/5 keep up the good work

xoxox
Jess

It brings back some memories...

clearly a very deep poem, touched my heart more than i'll ever be able to explain...

*keep on*
Isabel :)