HI Chelsea , You asked for my opinion for whatever it is worth it will be an honest one

I found this first one I've read to be very well written
I has a good flow , a lot of meaning
although I saw some pain in there it came across more like caution bacause thruout the poem you remained optomistic about your fears I dont personally rely on my opinion , I comment on how the poem makes me feel
and I believe that way the poem serves its purpose
I write my poems to make people feel and to think

yours have certainly done this for me

now on the down side use the spell check box I spell pretty good
but when I type fast it is a different story