Wow.a very great poem.5/5
**harlea

Nice!
-megan

Right now I don't know what to say, or do I?

Should I compliment you on structure first, or the emotion contained throughout? First or second, second or first? My mind is muddled and knows not what to do for the best? LOL

The poem raises questions throughout and thankfully concludes at the end. There is a nice tension to this piece. giving the reader a real sence of your train of thought and consequencely a dramatic flavour.

I would personally re-title this piece, as it is too obvious, well that is my thought! Maybe Crossroads, or Intersection insanity, Crossroad conundrum? just an idea?

A good write. 5/5

Michael