Comments : You Lied

  • 15 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Alana , that was such a wonderful poem of necessity .I only regret it was necesary for you to write, for it is so wrong to be that way ! I believe you need to let your daddy read this for himself, a daddy's love is to precous to not enjoy , much less to be replaced by falsehoods Your wounds will heal soon I pray ! when your daddy lies to you pat him back in TRUTH ! i'M A DADDY OF THREE

  • 15 years ago

    by JD

    Awww :(
    This poem is wonderful.
    Next time you dad lies to you, ask him for the truth.
    When my guinea pig died i had to ask 3-4 times for the truth.
    :'(
    Your style of poem much reminds me of mine.

  • 13 years ago

    by A Real Poet

    This poems reminds me of my dad when I was younger. Jus know your not the only one with a father like that.
    Nice poem. Take care