This poem was excellent, it showed me that you shared some wonderful times in high school with some pretty amazing people this year that you'll never forget and will always hang on to. it was a nice shout-out sorta poem in which you mentioned each one of your friends who made your year in high school worthwhile. the rhyming was pretty good i thought, it didnt seem too forced or anything.. so nice job right there. good job overall. 5/5.