Comments : 13. My Wedding Vows To You*

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Awww....this is so cute! Good luck to you and your soon to be husband! This part was so adorably sweet!!:

    "I would climb the highest mountain
    Just to be with you.
    I would swim in the deepest ocean
    Just to hold and touch you.
    I would run for miles
    Just to feel your sweet lips on mine forever."

    Shows how much you truly love him. I loved reading every line and it also shows the power of love. So keep writing, and take care! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by SweeT pOisOn

    Cute...simple and cute...u go gurl...

  • 9 years ago

    by mandy

    Aw, that's so sweet. Love every single line, beautiful. 5/5

    -mandy :)

  • 9 years ago

    by blakeluver

    I like this poem because its foreal.and its very sweet

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael

    I loved reading every line of this poem perfect for me 5/5

  • 1 year ago

    by Little Silver Pen

    ...It's so cute.