Comments : The kiss

  • That is super funny LOL Very Loud

  • 9 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    That is so sweet and so funny really put a smile on my face

  • 9 years ago

    by Bugg

    Aw, cute!! :) I saw that somewhere else, too, but it was a different version and it didn't rhyme. Your's is way better.

  • 9 years ago

    by SweeT pOisOn's cute and absolutely funny

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    Lol that's so adorable...5/5 very cute

  • 9 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Awww thats soo cute!!!!! haha

  • 9 years ago

    by Scott C

    Haha i liked it.

    thats how i feel after a first kiss, all the time.

  • 9 years ago

    by Michelle

    This is one of the cutest poems ive ever read... It made me smile! Great Job 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by thesuffocationinsafety

    Ahaha! This is so cute and way funny!
    I love it =D

  • 9 years ago

    by Larkky

    i get it

  • Cute. But I think that it would have been funnier if u had made it longer.


  • 9 years ago

    by andhereIstand

    This is so cute i love it!

  • 9 years ago

    by Hayley

    Haha brilliant