Razor blade kiss (Vampire story)

by Four Letter Lie   Jun 8, 2008


I'll give you my razor blade kiss,
It'll cut you up inside.
You wont know what hit you,
But you'll feel so alive.

My blood thirsty lips,
Will kiss your innocent wrists.
As the blood begins to drain,
You'll feel a slight stinging pain.

And as you fall to the floor,
You'll start to feel faint.
Your bloods so wonderfully red,
Like beautiful acrylic paint.

You eyes stare aimlessly back,
I know your worlds gone black.
I bet now you regret wanting my kiss,
You're just another blood bag on my list.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Cate Rock

    Oh W.o.W. This is brilant!!!! haha not a flaw in sight. Its perfect. BRAVA. i wish i could give it a higher rating than 5/5 but cant. i really love this, u did a great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    Another great poem.
    So unattached emotionally-very very good.

    Another 5/5, i see that with our love of vampires we have alot in common. Ive never written poetry about them though-mainly just books (omg twilight!!!!!!!!!!), movies and tv series....

    you might have inspired me.....
    hit me up anytime if you want to talk
    xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow!!! this was awesome!!1 i love it =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Maya

    AMAZING

    one of your best eva!
    pia i love your stuff and just so u know CUTHS MISSES U!
    we luv u babe and we're glad ur hapi at mt hobbies!

    Maya

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    I loved this.
    I could really relate
    to it and know exactly how it feel.
    Your words were very powerful
    and showed exactly what its like
    when you cut.
    I use yo cut for a really long time actually
    but then I realized
    by cutting although it helped take the
    pain that was inside and inflict it
    on my body
    the cuts always left scars that remind me of the bad times.
    Anyway great job :)

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