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by themeuneverseen Jun 9, 2008
Love, romance /
i love you
Baby I want you to know just how I feel
So I'm writing this poem every word so real.
From the way you kiss me late into the night
To the way you eyes glow in just the right light.
I love your smile, your smell, your touch
Its a constant reminder why I love you so much.
You've got me addicted to all the things you do
I can't pull myself away when I'm lying next to you.
Baby your everything I want and more
Your the only one I truly love and adore.
You have my heart forever, it's yours to keep
This love we have is so special and deep.
My heart tells me we are truly meant to be
That you are the perfect one for me.
Your hand laced in mine feels so right
My face lights up whenever you come into sight.
I know that I was so blessed to find you
Without you in my life I don't know what I'd do.
You help me get through the darkest of days
Whether it's a kiss or a hug, you have your ways.
You put a smile on my face when you walk in the door
Knowing that your here, your my heart and my core.
Baby you will always be perfect in my eyes
After all this time you still give me butterflies.
To me baby, you can do no wrong
Through the fussing and fighting, we've come out strong.
We've been through so much in the past
But I know that me and you will always last.
My best friend, my lover, my sweetheart, my boo
I hope you know i will always love you.
Forever and ever to your arm i will cling.
I don't want anyone else because your my everything.
Love it! your writin is very good. and yes it wont let me type very much in boxes on my phone. sucks.
I really loved it! It was really cute! I only found a few things wrong, though (and they're really small).
"I can't pull myself away when I'm lieing next to you."
^^'Lieing' should be spelled 'lying'
"Weither it's a kiss or a hug, you have your ways."
^^'Weither' should be spelled 'whether'
Overall, good poem. I thought it was truthful, and I hope that whoever you wrote it for gets to see it! It was beautiful. 5/5