Hi,
I have read your peoms,they are GREATTT...i am impressed,I will be greatly honoured,if you comment on my poems,atleast mark corrections,or give some suggestions,please,your words will be of great importance to me,
Thanks

Hi,
I have read your peoms,they are GREATTT...i am impressed,I will be greatly honoured,if you comment on my poems,atleast mark corrections,or give some suggestions,please,your words will be of great importance to me,
Thanks

I agree with muhammad =]
my poems dont need corections.
is that right my strawberry muffin. =]
i love you

Wow this was so deep. so pure and loving, yet sad. it was beautiful. a lovely thing to write about. you did a great job at expressing yourself. the emotions you expressed made it worth reading. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Another amazing write! You are just blowing me away. I don't really usually like prose poetry because it doesn't have a flow or anything with it, but it still works out just as good as when a poem does have a flow, IMO. This poem was very well expressed and true emotions shined again. :] Hmm, I'm just making a request; I think that you should try writing a poem that has a flow and a rhyme possibly? I'd be interested to see what you come up with. Anyways, this poem was definatly 5/5. Flawless.