Comments : A Celluloid Reality (I Wish This Were True)

  • 9 years ago

    by Max Burkert

    This is a great poem and kind of sad.

  • 9 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    Such a better ending :) I really like the use of description you choose gave a alot of emotion and fear. For eg. The darkness seemed to kill like a disease, Engulfing the eerie forest that I was caged in -AND- The fiery dancers burning my blistered skin to the bone. I could feel the pain happening. Great work!

  • 9 years ago

    by Aussie

    What a wild twisted ending. gr8 job:)