That was a nice piece of work on painting dark n sad fragments of words in poetry form...

God work again Ash..

Keep it up....

One of the great poems I read so far... so deep and meaningful... keep up the good work!

Insight to the soul through a shattered staind glass window this poem brings back some memeries

I truly have no words to descr ibe the critivity this poem was written with ! even i cannot choose my prefreable part ! it all came out so expressive and poetic,yet so sad !

Wow..... u are creative with words......
with all the words u use, u are deep....
i read some of ur poems, i believe u write it with feelings
well........ 5/5 for this one.....
i like this one a lot.....
keep writing..........
hope to read more of ur poems soon. =)

OMG!!this poem iz sooooo great..totally loved it especially the vocabulary that you used...

Good expression of thoughts. as everyone said this was very creative. good use of words. looking for more!

One of the best i have read so far..alot of meaning behind.
cant wait for more

I think you are addicted to this kind of poems

sad feelings mixed with confusion soul

i hope your soul can find what it misses

I love the way you use your words. Beautifully written... It's so full of emotion. I really like this one :D.

Ravyn