Comments : A bleeding heart...

  • 9 years ago

    by Prasad Ramesh Baadkar

    That was a nice piece of work on painting dark n sad fragments of words in poetry form...

    God work again Ash..

    Keep it up....

  • 9 years ago

    by LadzOfSoul

    One of the great poems I read so far... so deep and meaningful... keep up the good work!

  • 9 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Insight to the soul through a shattered staind glass window this poem brings back some memeries

  • 9 years ago

    by Ezzey

    I truly have no words to descr ibe the critivity this poem was written with ! even i cannot choose my prefreable part ! it all came out so expressive and poetic,yet so sad !

  • 9 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    Wow..... u are creative with words......
    with all the words u use, u are deep....
    i read some of ur poems, i believe u write it with feelings
    well........ 5/5 for this one.....
    i like this one a lot.....
    keep writing..........
    hope to read more of ur poems soon. =)

  • 9 years ago

    by Fabiola Marquez

    OMG!!this poem iz sooooo great..totally loved it especially the vocabulary that you used...

  • 9 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Good expression of thoughts. as everyone said this was very creative. good use of words. looking for more!

  • 9 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    One of the best i have read so far..alot of meaning behind.
    cant wait for more

  • 9 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I think you are addicted to this kind of poems

    sad feelings mixed with confusion soul

    i hope your soul can find what it misses

  • 9 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I love the way you use your words. Beautifully written... It's so full of emotion. I really like this one :D.

    Ravyn