Comments : Don't fear I am here

  • 9 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, this is a fantastic poem. You have just reminded me of my best friend who always have been beside me when I feel terrible. I hope your friend will overcome this soon.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Great bro as always!!!
    u showed the real picture of friendship.
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Adel,

    Your friend is very fortunate to have you and I think that you give enough:)
    Love is all that matters and when that is what you are able to give, it is enough:)

    Love, Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow that is so far one of my favorite poems. I wish I had a friend who was that true and loving. You have a lot of talent. I love "I will be your candle to show you the way for you I will melt and die to shine your days". It is actually so good that I wish I could say it were one of my lines.

  • 9 years ago

    by The Queen

    As always your poems never failed to touched my heart deeply..A loving and sincere piece dedicated to your bestfriend..Excellent piece..

  • 9 years ago

    by Prasad Ramesh Baadkar

    What a poem... Wish I had one ... just single friend who had such a wonderful thought as your poem..

    But true friends are hard to find....

    Anyway That was a wonderful poem...

    Thanks for sharing it with us...

    Keep it up..

    Best wishes... Karan

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Wow! 23 I's and forced rhyming throughout the piece....A nice dedication to your friend but as far as rhythm, flow and creativity, I have to say there wasn't any. Maybe try to rewrite it without forcing all the rhymes and remove all those unnecessary filler words.