Wow, this is a fantastic poem. You have just reminded me of my best friend who always have been beside me when I feel terrible. I hope your friend will overcome this soon.

Great bro as always!!!
u showed the real picture of friendship.
5/5

God bless u

Adel,

Your friend is very fortunate to have you and I think that you give enough:)
Love is all that matters and when that is what you are able to give, it is enough:)

Love, Ingrid

Wow that is so far one of my favorite poems. I wish I had a friend who was that true and loving. You have a lot of talent. I love "I will be your candle to show you the way for you I will melt and die to shine your days". It is actually so good that I wish I could say it were one of my lines.

As always your poems never failed to touched my heart deeply..A loving and sincere piece dedicated to your bestfriend..Excellent piece..

What a poem... Wish I had one ... just single friend who had such a wonderful thought as your poem..

But true friends are hard to find....

Anyway That was a wonderful poem...

Thanks for sharing it with us...

Keep it up..

Best wishes... Karan

Wow! 23 I's and forced rhyming throughout the piece....A nice dedication to your friend but as far as rhythm, flow and creativity, I have to say there wasn't any. Maybe try to rewrite it without forcing all the rhymes and remove all those unnecessary filler words.