WOW!!! A lovely poem indeed!!! The ryming is magnificent. A wonderful poem that I loved reading. Even the emotions were clear and so real. I felt them when I read this poem. You are indeed a talented writer. Keep writing please!!!

Im liking your poem, i thought of using it as a rap

Omg daniel...thats better than any poem that anyone has ever written me b4.....i loved it and ill call you latterrrr!
kayla

This is the most purrtiest poem i have ever read.
you are like... the most amazing writer EVER!
fantastical job <333
*MuaH*
--i love my ninja!!!!!!!!!!!!--

This onz really down 2 earth n so many of us all can easily relate to this...

Keep it up