Inside

by Rachelle   Jul 9, 2008


Bottled up inside
are the words I never said
The feelings that I hide
The lines u never read.

You can see it in my eyes
you can read it on my face
Trapped inside are lies
Of the past I can't replace.

With memories that linger
Won't seem to go away
Why can't I just be happier?
Today's a brand-new day.

Yesterdays are over
Even though the hunting's not
Nothing lasts forever
I must cherish what I've got.

Don't take my love for granted
For soon it will be gone
all u ever wanted
was the love u thought you'd won.

The hurt I'm feeling
Won't disappear over night
But someway, somehow,
Everything will be all right.

No more wishing for the past
It wasn't meant to be
It didn't seem to last,
So I have to set him free.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    I like it. Try to be less obvious with your rhymes though. Face and replace rhyme but it makes it obvious. Face and ways don't rhyme but they sound so much alike. It's a pseudo rhyme.

  • 15 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    That was definitely an incredible write! great structure, great flow, great emotion, great wording, and the tone was perfect 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Aww, this was a very good poem, i loved the rhyming and flow of the poem. great job

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    A thoughtful and beautiful write. excellent flow and form. the first four lines were perfect, a great opener. keep writing you have great talent. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Good poem, keep up the good work, got to go to work now, take luck.

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