Comments : In Your Arms I Lay

  • 8 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    A very touching and wonderful poem. Love is wonderful when you have the right man. Your words expressed such loving emotions. Nicely done it touched my heart .

  • 8 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Awe , i love this . It's so cute , i really enjoyed reading this . My favorite part is the last two lines of the first stanza . 5/5 love , it's perfect .

  • 8 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Your words were so cute in this poem and they really express a true love feeling. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    A really lovely love poem it was sweet and seemed to be written from the heart, well done

    Grant

  • 8 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Th fact that somone love the other, is something yuo cou can not always find !

    and you used a lot of actions to say these to your read , from the way he touch you , and you look at him , with no words ,

    this is the lovers heaven , this si the land where we are all wanting to go !

    there is always , a way , always when there is love , love is like a buldozer , if there is no way , he make on !!

    great on !! 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Cara,

    So very sweet and tender...a really touching write!
    He must have loved it very much when he laid eyes on this:)
    A very good job!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    A very deep and lovely write. quite emotional and heartfelt. a simply beautiful piece, i loved it. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 8 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I wake up in the morning with you beside me
    With just one look from you, my soul is set free
    Your arms around my waist, I feel so complete
    The words you whisper to me are ever so sweet
    ^^such a warm and fuzzy feeling opening : ) it makes the reader smile

    I do not say a word, but in your arms I lay
    When I am with you, my troubles float away
    Hold me forever babe, I need you here
    A day without you, is my deepest fear
    ^^ those feelings when they are this strong make every problem melt away and make life worth while

    You look into my hazel eyes, "I love you" escapes from your lips
    Your hands start to wander downwards of my hips
    Your loving fingers take rest upon my thigh
    Your touch makes me feel like I could fly
    ^^ : ) ahh so cute!!! i cant name one girl who WOULDN'T want this!

    Never leave me my baby; I need you by my side
    I need you to help me; I need your special guide
    I have to see your smile at the start of each new day
    And then no matter what I face, I know there is a way
    ^^ cherish the person that makes you feel this way !

    5/5 great great great job!!
    i voted for you : )

  • 8 years ago

    by IML

    I really do enjoy this poem. its nice.
    nice job, great stuff there Cara.
    nice :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Faithless

    This poem is very touching indeed. It's just so beautiful and the flow was silky smooth
    I wish that poem was written for me...The one that lays beside you must've been a lucky guy.

    5/5 from me

  • 8 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Wow! 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    This is awsum going into my favourites for sure =]