Ooh, I loved the end! Normally, I don't read love poems, because I think they're all cliche. Not this one. I mean, yeah, many other people have written on the subject of where love will lead us/the end of love/what love brings, but this one is the best I've read, by far, on any of those. I thought this poem was really, really good! I would give you a 10 if I could.
HAH! Crap. I meant to say "It's NOT bad" rather than "It was bad".
10 years ago
by 4 track demo
So...by "minute poem", does that mean you wrote it in one minute?...i thought there were some superb one-liners in there, and a lot of it flowed very nicely, i didn't feel much passion while reading it though (and im kind of a wierdo like that), not to downplay your work, it was a good piece, but if it took you one minute to write this, i would really like to read one that you spent..say....an hour on :)
still,. good stuff...
This poem had awesome vocabulary, and flowed so beautifully with a rhyme that was NOT forced, which is hard to come by these days. So many people force their rhymes, and I don't think you did that here. Which is great. XD Great poem, very well written.. 5/5
I have one word...WOW! That was amazing man. I heard your words well, but FELT their meaning even more. It's hard to find good poetry now days but you do an excellent job. Love and Lust are hand in hand and i love how you point out how many people just say the words without feeling their true meaning. That end stanza was flawless. Great timing to end the poem and with perfect finality. (5/5) Only thing i see wrong is spelling errors but who cares, poetry is about passion and emotion not rules. Great job.