Comments : If

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I really like this, very well-written.....

    "If this heart stopped beating
    Would it still be alone?
    Or dance with Angels of the worlds unknown?"

    ^Loved that line, and every part had so much feeling and was so heartfelt....

    I really enjoyed this, so keep it up! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    This is amazing!! i really enjoyed it!! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Josh

    Very good. i often wonder the same things.

    Keep it up.

    -Josh

  • 9 years ago

    by kerrigan

    Your amazing this is GREAT
    keep it up
    5/5

    ~kerrigan~

  • 9 years ago

    by Katie

    This poem went straight to my favorites! Good job!

  • 9 years ago

    by j3liBn

    I loved this poem so much!!!!!!!!!!some of it reflects how i feel sometimes...beautiful...

  • 8 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Really amazing. Oh how many times I have had these thoughts.
    So beautiful
    5/5, Keep it up