I really like this, very well-written.....

"If this heart stopped beating
Would it still be alone?
Or dance with Angels of the worlds unknown?"

^Loved that line, and every part had so much feeling and was so heartfelt....

I really enjoyed this, so keep it up! :)

This is amazing!! i really enjoyed it!! 5/5

Very good. i often wonder the same things.

Keep it up.

-Josh

Your amazing this is GREAT
keep it up
5/5

~kerrigan~

This poem went straight to my favorites! Good job!

I loved this poem so much!!!!!!!!!!some of it reflects how i feel sometimes...beautiful...

Really amazing. Oh how many times I have had these thoughts.
So beautiful
5/5, Keep it up