One of Them

by Ignoris   Jul 15, 2008


If only they knew how the world
Turns to gray
When they say those things and call me
Those names
If only they saw how I
Hope at night
For a new day to rise from the
Mornings light
If only they heard how I
Cry alone
When no one is there and I'll
Never be home
If only they felt the
Grief that I do
That I'll never belong, cause I
Need love too
If only they touched the heart that
Still beats
Then maybe they'd feel the warmth
They defeat
If only they knew how hard
I have tried
To be one of them but of that
I'm deprived

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  • 9 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    If only they touched the heart that
    Still beats
    Then maybe they'd feel the warmth
    They defeat

    that was amazing, truly well written and heartfelt. the structure really makes the poem breath taking. But all that aside hun, you don't want to be one of those people, because when all is said and done, they have only succeeded in making you stronger and they still will have to learn the lessons you have. They've put you ahead.

    Tash
    xxxx

  • 9 years ago

    by Kuro

    I feel like i can relate to this alot. thank you for writting it. i enjoyed reading, almost like a flash back to my own past. deja vu almost...

    i liked the rhyme too ^_^

  • 9 years ago

    by The Prince

    Brilliant, this really moved me, your word choice was excellent, and thanks for the comments on my poetry, it means a lot.
    Keep writing :]