Wow that was deep!
i am so sorry
i hope you are okay!
keep up the good writing though
5/5
<3
Lex

I can totally feel your emotions. You've spilled out your heart, and it's an amazing poem. I can see that you've been in some hard stuffs .. but it's good that you're out of it now.

No woman deserves to be hit.....and if a man hits a woman then hes no man....hes simply sad and weak.It was very brave of you to write this ,must have stirred up many old emotions...but you wrote so well ,it filled my eyes with tears as I read it.

Good girl... that was the right thing to do and he was just holding you back form the goals and the real true love you will find someday... good job and the poem was amazing....

Good girl... that was the right thing to do and he was just holding you back form the goals and the real true love you will find someday... good job and the poem was amazing....

5/5 absolutly amazing very sorry to hear that it's true i hope you are able to trust men after it abuse makes life so hard you did a perfect job of expressing it in this piece of writing the emotion is so strong in this well done!

The poem is good..but the inner meaning of it hurts..i know how it feels..i'm feeling it every time i turned my back to my gurl..im ashamed right now, and i dont what my gurl to turn her back on me..thank you for the poem..its a great inspiration for me..dont write another one or ill slap myself..he9..

The poem is good..but the inner meaning of it hurts..i know how it feels..i'm feeling it every time i turned my back to my gurl..im ashamed right now, and i dont what my gurl to turn her back on me..thank you for the poem..its a great inspiration for me..dont write another one or ill slap myself..he9..

I'm so sorry that this happened to you.

This poem is very well written, good flow, nice word choice.

keep up the good work!

5/5

Wow very very good, 5/5

It's an art to write something connected to the feeling you had at the time your heart was splitting into two, I do admire you for that...

You started facing tomorrow without the guy you love....and it's in a hard way...

Just one piece of advice, Keep loving but never let your heart break forever...

Goodluck!

This is a strong a deep situation i have a first love and he isnt physically violence but his words hit me pretty hard but i cant leave him i love him 2 much

Your poem moved me to tears it was so incredable im a so sorry that such a thing has happened to you! what horrors you must of been through. you are strong.....it may take time to heal but you are a strong person and what he did to you is unforgivable you derserve so much better! i hope you find someone who will treat you right! your poem is amazing and beautiful you expressed your emotions so well congrats on the win you derserve it 5/5

WOW...that was amazing writing. i felt like i was right there with you.

I am incredibly sorry this has happened to you. I strongly believe there is someone out there for everyone.. if you haven't yet, you will find that someone soon!

bonnie