Comments : The pretender

  • 9 years ago

    by Fanny

    My words cant even explain how good and meaningful this poem is! I love your poems. keep writing.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jaimee

    Ohhh my, you are a fantastic writer.
    I can definitely relate to this.
    GREAT job!

  • 9 years ago

    by Jessica Lynn

    I really like the rhyme scheme in this poem. its really good = ]

  • 9 years ago

    by broken reflection

    I really like this ~ I totally relate to it. Hiding who I am to make others happy. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Another truly brilliant piece. Your words were so powerful and truthful. I think in away we all wear our own masks pretending and putting on a facade. the thing is that life is basically a facade, we tell people we are okay when really we are completely broken on the inside but still put on a mask and pretend as if everything is okay. This poem really made me think about things that have happened really recently in my life. it truly is an amazing piece!!!! we done and take care xXx

  • 9 years ago

    by Jamica

    Great poem!!! Miss you too :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Allen

    Your words are truth, we the masked have to hide our true nature to be liked, to be loved. Truly good to see another like me.

  • 8 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    Fing love the idea behind your words hear, its a concept many people wrongly choose to ignore and even encourage, im glad you see past that. Very nice

    --TheGothicAlbino