Wow... intresting poem. very creepy which is very cool 5/5
**lesthat

Very original, i enjoyed this poem a lot.
You created a dark atmosphere with every word!, great job this poem was dark yet brilliant =]

Wow that was really kool.

i acually started saying the rhyme with it

^.^

Eh, not so good for me.
Some of the rhyming was very off, and you need to work on your rhythm if you're going to do pieces like that. The idea was okay, but the execution wasn't all it could be. Also, the second stanza should have had four lines like the rest.

Wow i really liked this...very eerie lol..

Oh my goodness.

i simply adore it<3

we should write together, i believe it'd be a fun project :)