Comments : Mary, Mary

  • Wow... intresting poem. very creepy which is very cool 5/5
    **lesthat

  • 9 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Very original, i enjoyed this poem a lot.
    You created a dark atmosphere with every word!, great job this poem was dark yet brilliant =]

  • 9 years ago

    by Rapheala

    Wow that was really kool.

    i acually started saying the rhyme with it

    ^.^

  • 9 years ago

    by ALEX

    Eh, not so good for me.
    Some of the rhyming was very off, and you need to work on your rhythm if you're going to do pieces like that. The idea was okay, but the execution wasn't all it could be. Also, the second stanza should have had four lines like the rest.

  • 9 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Wow i really liked this...very eerie lol..

  • 8 years ago

    by stella

    Oh my goodness.

    i simply adore it<3

    we should write together, i believe it'd be a fun project :)