Comments : Don't Look Under the Bed

  • 9 years ago

    by InvisiblyHeartless

    This is eerie. I like how you are so descriptive but it scares me. I like this. And even if I could I wouldn't change one single thing. Amazing. =]

    Lexie

  • 9 years ago

    by BornAgainWriter

    Gabby, once again you knocked me off my feet, and now I'm stumbling trying to get up and get fully balanced. And, you say....you haven't been writing good poems lately? ARE YOU SERIOUS? Like really. That poem was breath TAKING! I was literally gasping for air.

    1000/1000

  • 9 years ago

    by Always and Never

    Wow, i really liked this poem. its like your fighting the demons in your self. its an epic battle, i can take this poem and use it for so many things in my life. i really loved it, im adding it to one of my favorites.