This makes me think of one of my best friends who lives sooo far away from me, so you touched off for me, from the beginning. Some nice work and I think for the most part your flow was pretty on. I enjoyed this. Good work.
Oh Mo, I haven't read this poem since you first posted it. Rereading it now has made me cry. This is so very beautiful and it comes within instants of touching our beautiful Elisabetta. I miss her dearly.
Her spirit was a gift to us.
The brightest flame burns quickest.
Miss you! Come back to us in THE CLUB. We alllll miss you, lady.