Comments : Why Start A War?

  • 9 years ago

    by LitxUpxWithxLife

    "When man, blinded by power, delved deep into the secrets of gun powder
    When wars turned to who had the biggest guns, when the screams only got louder"
    ^ Great lines i understand what you mean here about how everything just seems to escalate. Nothing ever slows down but instead it all gets worse. I loved the poem it flowed fine to me. I really liked the repitition in those lines about war and peace. Excellent poem (5/5)

  • 9 years ago

    by Bianca

    As usual, fantastic job.
    I felt you expressed your thoughts clearly and in a way that leaves the reader speechless.
    Loved it. :D
    -Bianca