Aww yeah i'll bet he got teary eyed watching you write this... great job :]

one thing:

Watch my from the Heaven's
Help my every step
I want you to be proud of me
Even beyond your death

watch my from the heavens should be " watch me" :]

5/5

This is a sweet and heartfelt poem. My father and I are really close; I can't imagine loosing him in my life. Dealing with that grief and its effects on your life are hard, so poetry is a great way to work through it. Well written.