Comments : I'll Make you Proud.

  • 9 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww yeah i'll bet he got teary eyed watching you write this... great job :]

    one thing:

    Watch my from the Heaven's
    Help my every step
    I want you to be proud of me
    Even beyond your death

    watch my from the heavens should be " watch me" :]

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    This is a sweet and heartfelt poem. My father and I are really close; I can't imagine loosing him in my life. Dealing with that grief and its effects on your life are hard, so poetry is a great way to work through it. Well written.