Outro: Today at school, we were extremely close. It's such a nice feeling..
Heres a suggestion:
Today at school,
i got the greatest feeling,
we were extremely close,
and my heart is more than healing.
Hope you like it, and the rest of the poem was cute :)
good for you, and i seen you're quote that said you're now dating? yay, that must be the best thing in the world. Keep it up, and hope to read more poems about this great guy. best of luck to the both of you,