Magnetic, the way you expressed all the old feelings. Static the way you expressed all the new feeelings too. The two together, electric! Great write, 5/5

This was an emotional poem and it seemed very real. i've been in a similar situation so i can relate to it somewhat. i like it, 5/5.

Wow very deep and meaningful as always Erin great job = )

I like how you tell this story in a poem. It speaks onders and is very emotional and heartwrenching. Well written, 5/5. Em