Comments : Cursed Eyes

  • 9 years ago

    by HvN

    Wow... such a beautifully written sad piece of work... gosh this touch me so deeply.
    the ryme is so well written and the flaw.. incredible...

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by resisting reason

    I..i dont know what to say. that was incredible. simply.....amazing...wow, i wish i could say more. this doesnt usually happen to me..thank you

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I tottally understand what you mean here, it is a curse to see the world differently than other people do... I have a very unique personality between my class mates and it makes me feel lonely, especially when all of them have the exact opposite opinion

  • 9 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    Wow, this really is amazing. its beautiful, how you presented the sadness. its amazing how...detailed your description of your sight. i love this. its like it was radiating hate and lonliness, but in an entirlely new way.

    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 9 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    Wow. i'm practically speechless. this was one of the most intriguing poems i've read in such a long time. it was extemely creative and very deep. you poured your feelings out like it was nothing. what an amazing thing. the title was eye catchin and fit perfectly with the poem. the flow was fantastic also.

    I curse whoever gave me these eyes,
    I see eternity, you see the skies.
    You see a drop, I see the rain,
    You see the cut, I see the pain.

    that stanza was my favorite, it made the whole poem fall together for me. i can relate to this poem, it really, truly touched me. amazing job well done. 5.5,

    -Ashlei.