Comments : Emotionally Trapped

  • 9 years ago

    by Erin Donohoe

    This is a poem that I wrote that is very much like myself. Please comment!

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Feelin emotionally trapped with no where to go"

    feelin should be feeling.

    "She speaks but no on hears, choosing to ignore"

    no on should be no one.

    Otherwise I really liked this poem, very sad and heartfelt though. Good rhyming and word choice. Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 9 years ago

    by Erin Donohoe

    I am sorry about the spelling errors but you get the point.

  • 6 years ago

    by Katie

    I can really relate to this poem. I hope you keep writing. I've never really been into poems until after I read this one, and I loved it.