Comments : Emptiness

  • 10 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked this it was really good hun! keep up the good work and write more!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very emotional write. Poem of loneliness and sorrow. Good to read. well done!

  • 10 years ago

    by meganmarie

    This was good. beautifully written. beautiful emotions and depth.
    --lovedroughtmelody

  • 10 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Such a sad poem, but very deep and powerful. i loved it. keep on writing. Shanik

  • 9 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I really liked this poem. Esp how the first and last stanza had the sames lines... except for the fourth line which ends the poem with " a lost love I seek..." which to me is the meaning of the whole poem, Lol. You feel empty, beaten, weathered, falling apart in search of that love. A well written and poem with good use of words to express these empty feelings. Loved it :)

  • 9 years ago

    by victoria

    I love the whole ghost concept. very moving and emotional. Ive alwaysed wondered if a ghost has unfinished business-like love.lol.
    great job.
    love your work.

    victoria